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Losing you…..
is a nightmare.
Even while sleeping you are
the owner of my mind; the pain is continuous.
My soul cries as a child since I’ve lost your love
which is falling into a bottomless well.
My mind is dying as result of misery
that envelopes me into eternal and fearful shadows.
Forgetting you is like climbing never-ending stairs
through periods of days that takes me to extreme tiredness.
Perhaps it is not but deceit, but I cannot resign
to the desire of seeing you and dream that someday
I’ll enclose you in my arms and wrap you with kisses.
Finally I wake up, and it hurts me
that a way of losing you may exist,
but the wisdom of death won’t be able to hide you
from the manner that I keep on loving you.
By elnavy
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between the first stanza and the second
stanza.
In my opinion, the word "finally" in the
third stanza should be deleted and that may
add a strong tone to the poet's feeling.
the girl, and he so affraid of
losing her that even sleeping he
is thinking on her.
IS NOT EASY TO WRITE THIS KIND OF POEMS IT NEEDS A LOT OF EMOTIONS AND SENSITIVITY.
that the author made a succefull
attempt of expressing his deep
feelings, his state of mind, using
words only, which is something not everybody is able to achieve. He
used wonderfull figures, a noble
poetic English. Definetely, I think the author is a natural, true poet.